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【仙侠魔踪】第五集 / 第七回：双雕艳福【沐沐整理】

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Our Big Dragon's novels are those which always create very strong sex desire of the male readers. I just suspect even the impotent males will be sexually stirred up after reading his adult novels which are filled with lots sexual descriptions beyond our normal imaginations.

This popular novelist is not only expertised in creating stories with many sex scenes, he has also possessed a very high Chinese literacy.

Just take a look at the very beginning of this Chapter 5 Section 7: "The breeze flows gently and smoothly and the nightingales fly back home to their nests". See, everything is so poetic, quiet, smooth and comfortable. Such an calm atmosphere is make possible by this wonderful author with high command of writing.

But such a silent and comfortable atmosphere is suddenly twisted to a sharp contrast of another scene which implies bloodshed, killings, murderings and plottings. Such a dramatic contrast has immediatley heightened an intensive mood of excitement. At the beginning we are given a very peaceful atmosphere, then all a sudden we are given a total different picture of very heavy feeling. Such a manipulation technique in writing of contrasts is hard to write unless it is written by excellent writer like our Big Dragon.

At this stage, even though we are not given the actual scene of bloodshed of killings, we are led to the imagination of the possible terrible and cruel possible scenes of life and death. Through the conversations of the male and female characters, we know a horrible typhoon of tremendous damage is forth coming. This is yet another high technique of writing. The readers need not be given a real picture of description of the battlefield. They are induced to imagine through their conversations the possible happenings of the cruety of killings. All these have successfully created a strong sense of suspense which have aroused and heightened the curiosity and interests of the readers who are eager to look for the same answer - what will happen next?

I do not think any one dares to challenge the master skills in this writer's depictions of the sex acts in all his adult novels. Just like many of his famous writings, he has not failed us in giving us a very explicit description of the sex acts of a 3p sex games.

Most of the readers of this type of adult stories will no more be satisfied with stories talking how strong the male character is, how handsome he is, how big a sex organ he has possessed, how he has conquered all the female sex and keep on loving making, day and night and night and day ceaselessly. Such stories have more or less the same formular - the females are made to be the sex slaves of the male character and they have loving making and that is all, simply without telling the readers the physical, inward and psychological response in the intensive and exciting loving making.

Unlike the other novelists, our Big Dragon has very detailing presenting the physical, mental and psychological responses and feelings once they are in very close physical contacts. The extremely explicit descriptions of the muscle contractions of the vagina and the abundant secreations of love juice together with the description of the female sex organs are  absolutely too much to young and immature readers.

The characterizations are also a success. The male character looks physically strong, but he has weakness as well. He is a bit submissive to his wife. This has made the story look more real to life because we have got used to the other writers' stories in which the male characters are almighty all the time.

The ending of Section 7 of this Chapter 5 has built up another tension - the plotting of some sort of secret military actions which the readers are prepared to read some more exciting actions in the following chapters.

All in all, this famous writer has made a very wonderful structure of this story which has induced the readers to keep on reading.

This is definitely an excellent story of high recommendation.

(I have been allowed by many Chief Administrators to reply in English because I have no knowledge of putting Chinese words in the computor)

我支持多描写主角和他的女人，但也不反对放些笔墨在配角上面，配角故事写的成功可以使整体更宏大更立体更好的展示那个时代的风情。
这本书写的也不是主角的修真之路吧，相信多数人想看的也不是辛钘怎么变的更强之类，而是他在红尘里的情劫和艳遇。

抓虫 ：晚风习习，夜莺投林，太子的寝宫内静悄悄一"[color=Red]遍[/color]"  应该是静悄悄一片

便将她拥抱入怀，亲一亲脸蛋，问道：「现在想不想要，[color=Red]说我知[/color]？」应该是说与我知

芷儿羞得满脸[color=Red]飞和[/color]，却又无可奈何    应该是绯红或者飞红

李重俊得到[color=Red]鼓厉[/color]，立即加把劲儿    应该是鼓励

李重俊[color=Red]望里[/color]一刺   应该是往里

刘妃笑道：「芷儿妳还在[color=Blue]呆打颏[/color]干吗？难道要我为妳脱衣服不成？」
这句话里面的“呆打颏”本以为是错字 还特意去查了一下 呆打颏：亦作"呆答孩"。亦作"呆打孩"。 原来就是发呆，发楞的意思
能从大大文中看到不少类似的词 不知道这是哪里的习惯用语 还真是长了不少见识呢

[[i] 本帖最后由 tanguwa 于 2009-3-24 16:13 编辑 [/i]]

A moderator with very high language literacy: The Flirting Snow

I would like to express my sincere thanks to SIS's Moderator, The Flirting Snow(Translated by me), for his kindness to give me a high credit of marks in my commentary at Floor 15 on 22/4/09.

As this is the first time I have got in touch with this moderator, I have gone through most of his literary comments in SIS in order to obtain a better understanding of this gentleman.

To my great astonishment, he is such a gentleman embodied with very rich literacy both in Chinese and English language.

His comments are not only one or two lines, but always carry in-depth critical literay comments which cover quite a lengthy space. Yet such lengthy space will never make the readers feel boring because his comments are concise, concrete and meaningfull. It will be a great loss for any one who has missed out his comments.

Now I have a better understanding why SIS is so well-known among the websites of the similar types. SIS not only consists of an extensive forum with lots of sub-areas, it is injected with lots of moderators, like The Flirting Snow, who have good command of literacy, especially Chinese.

This is to say that the success of SIS will be ever lasting because it is built up on a very solid and strong support of excellent moderators.